Thursday 27 September 2018
T3W10 Writing
This week I have been using capital letters and full stops. I have made a book using google slides to write and illustrate my story. Please have a look and leave me a comment about my writing.
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Nishka!
ReplyDeleteYou have some great illustrations using the trace button on slides this week! Well done! I loved the range of punctuation you have used, like the speech marks. Make sure that next time you finish all your illustrations to complete your book :) Ka pai, Nishka!
From Miss Walters
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ReplyDeleteHi Miss W
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From Nishka
Hi there Nishka, I like how you made your illustrations with the curve button. maybe you could change the colour of the writing all black because it's a little hard to read it when it is different colours. Also please make sure that you add more illustrations
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